Second Storyboard

Having taken on board the feedback given on my previous storyboard I have incorporated some of the ideas to create a narrative that fits together better. Below is my new storyboard...

Shot 1- START The first photograph will be my own version of the given photograph involving the two doors. This week I haven't been able to shoot my own because of light conditions when trying to shoot the image. I will need to do this before the next feedback.

Shot 2- The next image will show the other side of the closed door seen in the given image belonging to Flat Owner A, as if seeing the door from the flat owners point of view.

Shot 3- This will be the same composition as the previous image but there will now be a piece of paper under the door. 

Shot 4- Flat Owner A will be holding the piece of paper as if reading it, this will be a letter from the neighbour (Flat Owner B) across the hall inviting her round for a drink (the door seen open in shot 1).

Shot 5- Flat owner A will get her keys and bag off her desk as if about to go out.

Shot 6- Will be opening her door, her bag is seen on her arm, to reinforce she has left with it. The bag will be essential in the following shots.

Shot 7- Flat Owner A's door is open and we can see Flat Owner B's door is also open. Something is on the floor in B's doorway.

Shot 8- Close up of the item in B's doorway. It is a ripped photo.

Shot 9- Flat owner A reaches in her bag for her purse after seeing the photo.

Shot 10- Purse is open. In the see through part of the purse the other half of the photo is seen.

Shot 11- The two halves of the photo are held together by Flat Owner A to show the audience the fitting of the two together.

Shot 12- Flat Owner A drops the photos in shock. Shot is the two photos falling.

Shot 13- Flat Owner A leaves B's Flat, can see open door of Flat B, and the closed door of A's flat, and the light on the door seen in shot 1.

Shot 14- Flat Owner A is rushing to get back into her flat, key in door.

Shot 15- Back at Shot 1. END