- I will be simplifying the narrative, to avoid the audience misreading my narrative. Previous storyboards were just too complicated and the structure wasn't working.
- I have decided to take my narrative in the direction of letter conversations between the two flats.
- My try one narrative with just letters being passed over and then another with photos being switched at the end.
- Will need to photograph whole sequences this week as not long left to complete assignments.
I will now write a revised proposal discussing the narratives of switching of letters.
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