Monday, 22 October 2012

Revised Proposal

For the circular narrative module I have been given the image with a closed door seen, and then light from an open door which would be opposite the closed door. 


In the last few weeks I have created storyboards which have involved a lost family connection being found through a photograph of two halves linking the flat owners together. I have also involved a letter being slotted under the closed door as an invitation for the flat owner living there to be suspicious of the opposite flat owner, therefore being the element to draw her into the open door and finding the half photograph. In feedback sessions it was clear I needed to simplify my narrative/ idea.

I have now decided to focus my narrative on the passing of letters from flat to flat. I may also fit the photograph element into the narrative as a revelation in the last two letter switches. I will not necessarily need to show the content of these letters, this will create the mystery element and the audience will make their own assumptions as to what the messages could be.

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