First Feedback

In my first feedback session I talked through my storyline/ proposal. I then recieved some advice on certain aspects. Here was what was mentioned-

• Consider atmosphere, lighting and angles carefully when starting to photograph the shots.
• Will need to change having a fire exit opposite the seen flat, as normally you wouldn't have a fire exit so close to a flat. 
• Open door could be to a corridor.
• Long lost relative could be living opposite and not known who each other was because they haven't seen each other since childhood. 
• Relative could be mother or sister, half sister.
• Relative could be keeping theeir door open on purpose so they are found.
• Black and white suggests memory/ flashback.
• Black and white creates contrast.

In the next week I will be considering these points and drawing a shot by shot storyboard in which I will base my photographs on.