Final Feedback Before Hand In

A few days ago I received feedback on my first full sequence which documented a conversion between two flats using letters. Here was what was advised…

• Another shot needs to be added between each letter given, this could be a shot of the other side of the doors seen, to show the receiving of the letter, this will make it clear a letter has been delivered. This will mean 3 shots per letter. 
• Use shot 3, second shot of the two doors as shot 1, so that same opening way as given image. 
• Use two people as the hands in the posting of letters so audience can distinguish two different people are posting letters. Use either man’s hand or have bracelets on one. 
• Shot from inside that will be added will be noticeable lighter to contrast with dark hallway. 
• Reshoot the closed door with light from open door because open door needs to be closed more, less light on door, this will imitate the given photograph. 
• Straighter angles when photographing doors- more like given photo again. 
• More width to the photographs. 
• More contrast and brightness to photographs.

I will consider this feedback and re shoot accordingly.